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    Will

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    They say that angels walk among us,
    and I'm beginning to think
    that maybe they've been right all along.

    She was taken away
    and now she's in a better place,
    but I can't help but wish
    that she was still here.

    Everything she did was beautiful
    and everything she did was pure.

    She brought the city's lights
    to the dimmest of glows
    but it didn't rain when they carried her away.

    Young and beautiful,
    headstrong and hard-headed,
    she had the highest of aspirations
    and was headed in the right direction.

    She'll never be just a memory.

    She'll never be just a friend.

    She's a part of everyone
    who's set foot in this small town
    and she'll be carried on in our hearts.

    She'll live forever.

    They say that angels walk among us,
    and I'm beginning to think
    that maybe they've been right all along.

    Everything she did was beautiful
    and everything she did was pure.

    She's the angel who walked among us.

    I know they were right all along.​
     
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    Linja

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    *emotional* Beautiful.
     
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    Will

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    Thanks. :)
     
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    esaul17

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    Good job. You're really talented.
     
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    Amazing. You never disappoint me Will. ^_^
     
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    Thanks again.
     
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    Amanda

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    You've never ceased to amaze me, Will. You are a writing god. You can pretty much twist the minds of your readers into recognizing any emotion, idea or thought process that you want them to percieve. This is, in my opinion, one of your best works and I hope to see more like it.
    Two words:

    Absolutely. Phenomenal.
     
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    Will

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    Thanks a lot. :)
     

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