All of my life I have been caught in this whirl wind But you never helped, just turned your head and grinned I am trapped, alone in my mind While everyones staring like I am so out of line All of your life you have been thinking I'm helpless Watching me fall is the peak of your success Trying to place yourself above everyone I won't even try to save your ego on the run ©Sarah P. and Mike M, 2003 I don't know how good it is, but its unfinished *shrug*
I think it's good, but some words remind me LP - it's like a whirl wind insiede of my head etc, but it doesn't "even mather" I like your song