Untitled Poem

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Glenn, Jul 31, 2004.

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    Glenn

    Glenn Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Enjoy! B)

    Your comments hurt more than you thought they would
    I tried to tell you but you misunderstood
    And laughed it away so hard you couldn’t see
    The laughs and jokes seeped right inside of me
    All the ignorance and disregard has me pissed
    You see right through me and don’t even know I exist
    At first it was mutual, oh yes it was grand
    But you slipped right over me, now you have the upper hand.
    You’re using the power and authority for advantage
    And taking everything you own including me for granted
    How would you feel if I suddenly let go?
    Would you finally realize life isn’t such an easy flow?
    But rather a shove and a slap in the face
    Like when all I wanted to do was erase
    All of the pain you put me through
    And all years you had the aerial view.

    Comments please? :)
     
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    Madi

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    That really good. ^_^ It flows really well.
     
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    erasethepain

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    The flow is freak-a-leak.
     

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