Here's a song I started writing today...but I can't finish it. I may finish it sometime down the line though. Let me know what you think of it. ------------------------- “Untitled” Sometimes, I wish I could stop time I’d retrace my steps and all would be fine Yet the sidewalks still move beneath my bare feet Often reminding me of how life should be But I don’t ever remember walking this far It’s as if I was guided by the North Star Subconsciously pushing me forward And slowly moving me further toward The ultimate goal of having a perfect life Fuck that, it’s bullshit – I’ll swallow the knife I can’t wait for tomorrow A chance to leave this sorrow Run away from my mistakes There’s nothing more I can take I’d rather be all alone And just get away from home Everything’s fallen apart You’re aiming straight for the heart So tear me down Rip my heart from my chest Throw me around When you’re done, let me rest
i thought that was really good ; not a big fan of rhyming though.. and that seemed pretty.. finished. to me, at least. the last stanza (or whatever you would call it :/) just seemed pretty short, and a tone of.. finality in it. oh well. it's still just as good.