Unease.

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    The Emptiness Machine

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    The Emptiness Machine, Sep 7, 2012



    Unease

    I am uneasy when I look at you
    Uneasy, indeed, in all that I do.
    within my slumber and within my dream
    I hear none but your many voices sing
    I kissed those lips from which beauty emits
    engulfed myself in gardens of tulips
    here the sky is a lighter shade of blue
    Now I'm uneasy all because of you.
     
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    Shmoanator, Sep 7, 2012



    I like it :chuck:
     
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    Melis

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    Melis, Sep 9, 2012



    I really like that! Especially the following line is amazing 'I kissed those lips from which beauty emits' :)
     
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    The Emptiness Machine, Sep 9, 2012



    Thanks 26 and Melis!

    I thought I'd try my hand in writing something in abstract meter.
     
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    Melis

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    Melis, Sep 9, 2012



    You are welcome! :)
     

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