Uncultured Society

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Friskey™, Sep 7, 2007.

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    Friskey™

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    Lock lips with the enemy now
    Why don't you?
    Or are you afraid of finding out
    The real truth behind the mask.
    Loose lips never sink ships
    Only sink desperate cries for attention
    Out of the desolate society you're born from
    So go fuck somebody for affection.
    These days aren't the same
    These times aren't the ways
    Everything's different now.

    The only time is now though
    Feel good
    Feel proud
    This is my uncultured society.
     
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    Mr. Hell

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    ok thanks for sharing.
     
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    Friskey™

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    Ooookay.
     
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    Linja

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    That was weird :lol: The comment, that is.

    I like this short and abstract to the point of being sharp new style of yours.
     
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    Tim

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    I would have preferred to have, at least, another stanza in it. Besides that though, I though it was really well done, loved your topic as well. 7.5/10 :)
     

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