unborn child

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by LinettePham, Apr 22, 2008.

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    LinettePham

    LinettePham Member

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    this is a poem i wrote back in the 9th grade narrating a serene moment i had walking with the boyfriend at the time. it's really pathetic, but what the heck--lp

    here down the asphalts of leon valley

    are lesbian negro women dressed like men
    wearing mean in their voices
    their hands held each other close like dreams
    of an unborn child

    scraps of newspaper skitter the floor
    giving voice to the ancient between quiet
    and aging headlines
    like father who spoke to the womb
    home of the unborn child

    our footsteps spanned the concrete hills
    eyes scaling the orange-burned sky
    my heart tied loosely to your dazzling wit
    like the unnatural wonders
    forgotten by the unborn child

    unborn child, by linette pham
     
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    Speed Freak

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    Very interesting....I don't think I would have seen that..great piece
     

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