I play bass in an NERD/LP style band and I do vocals and I was wondering what you guys thought of these lyrics. They are the rough draft so they will change Boiling Point The task at hand is us Drawn together, then pushed away At the same I beg to stay I don'nt know what I'm saying or what I just want to get close enought to feel whisper(What I thought was real) (Chorus:Screaming/Singing) Take me back to a place I know so well When I could tell I'm at the Point of No Return This is just another lesson learned Stop me from doing whatever brought us together And what pushed you away (keep your Distance)I'd watch you through a looking glass I'd sit back/While time will pass I wish I could step back to the time I was sane Instead breaking my back to know your name But I've reached a point where Take one step back Cause you cannot Stay Bridge Don't take me away from myself Just want to be with But I need find myself Not the one you But the one I am Gave you my shoulder to catch your tears But you destroyed it can became my fears (Chorus:Screaming/Singing) Take me back to a place I know so well When I could tell I'm at the Point of No Return This is just another lesson learned Get away From Me Love in E Minor Sitting on the edge of my bed Just woke up (And I can Feel You) Put shoes on and I'm out I'm starring at my phone(And I can hear you) Everywhere I turn your there (And I can't get enough) I'm yours (but I can't have you) Or maybe I can Chorus Maybe we should give in And our love try We've come to the point where it's time to fly or Die So here we are in the same place It doesn't feel so bad I make an approach(cause I can see you) You flash a smile I spill my drink(Damn I am near you) Chorus & Bridge Maybe we should give in And give our love try We've come to the point where it's time to fly or Die Euphoria sets in looking to my left You appear standing there I don't if it's real or a hallucination But you are here and there no time for conversation Just lose control and give in to emotions Ending I wake and I'm slightly in a daze I feel your breath on me....