Two quite short poems.

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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    Okay... yeah... it's quite pointless to waste space so I'll just stuff two poems here. :p

    Untitled 1.

    The silence is unforgettable,
    it's taking over me,
    I've becoming so mad,
    the whispers in my head,
    just won't go away.
    I keep screaming my thoughts,
    but no one will hear them.
    Over and over,
    trying to me noticed and saved,
    is pushing me on the verge of breaking.
    Yearning for attention day to day,
    I can't think anymore,
    the voice of my thoughts,
    is getting so loud,
    screaming and yelling at me,
    I'm taking the knife again,
    I've had enough.

    Untitled 2.

    Confused,I stare into your eyes,
    but yet I see nothing there,
    nothing in your lifeless eyes,
    which might answer this.

    And you don't say anything to me,
    I'm begging a word,only one,
    to see if I am right or wrong.

    Curse this wicked ignorance,
    it's madly killing me inside,
    you don't know how helpless I am,
    I keep thinking about this day and night,
    wondering just how and when,
    you will say these words to me.


    Uh... not sure about these though. xD have a nice day. :D :p
     
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    Tom

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    (w00t) nice poems , loads of imagery and good language (w00t) :D keep up the good work and keep on writeing :D
     
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    fallenangel

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    the first one is by far the best!

    well done! ^_^
     

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