True

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    Rahat

    Rahat Nyeh LPA VIP

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    These are lyrics for a song i wrote for a certain someone. Its called "True"
    People have told me that rapping a love song is emo which pisses me off but yea this is rap

    Those three simple words could never describe
    the vibe in my heart
    or your beautiful smile such a great work of art
    or the beauty u possess
    the thing i wish i could always just caress
    i want you in my arms night and day
    and I'll have you cuz theres just no other way
    i can live my life so i'm here to say
    that i love you more and more everyday
    and to some i know its gonna sound cliche
    but hey were together anyway
    sometimes i wish i could give you what you really deserve
    somebody who isn't always bouncin of the curb
    somtimes i don't see
    why you pick me
    when you could have anyone else you see
    but i guess that its love with me and you
    and yea i really know that its true

    Chorus
    Just want you to know how i feel
    Just what you to know that its real
    These feelings i have are true
    Cuz its really just for you

    You gave me a shoulder to cry on
    a body to lye on
    i wanna take you and just fly on
    past the horizon
    until were gone
    and nobody will know where we've gone
    i just hope that this song will keep us strong
    cuz i love u
    and never wanna be with anyone else but you
    cuz to you i'll always be true
    cuz you took my cold heart
    you took it apart
    and melted it down into me
    and i thank you for changin me
    into the me that i see
    and now i think about now
    and look back wow
    you changed me but how
    was i really that different
    was i really that stiff and
    was i really such a dick
    u changed me so quick
    i guess i really do love you
    and yea you know its true

    Heard some people look sexy
    when they're angry
    so i guess i'll just make you mad to see if its true
    but i know that its not cuz its impossible to get
    any more beautiful then you
    nothins more beautifal then you are
    cuz you're a bright shining star
    your beauty above and far
    beyond anythin else around
    and nobody else can astound
    me the way that you can
    cuz you picked me before any other man
    as i stand and i hold your soft hand
    i never wanna let go
    not ever and no
    so i guess i really do love you
    and yea you know that its true

    I can no longer see
    or picture myself to be
    with anyone else cuz me
    the person you see
    is always gonna be hear
    and is always gonna take your fear
    and make it dissapear
    whatever it may be i'll be
    your knight in shining armor you'll see
    so i hope that you know
    i'll never ever go
    so that doesn't have to be one of your fears no
    and even though
    i have this one
    tellin me to run
    and tellin me your not the one
    i'll still be hear
    cuz he's no longer a fear
    and he's the one who will soon dissapear
    Two whole years...
     
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    Version One

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    don't worry about people calling it emo. write about whatever you feel. never let anyone tell you what constitutes a rap. at your age i was writing stuff like this all the time. i like it. i think the older you become the more complex/diverse your selection of words/rhymes will become, but i'm still feeling this. keep it up.
     
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    Rahat

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    yea thanks man, thanks for commenting
     

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