i started this after i wrote Sunken & i stopped writing it for a while, but i finished it today. You talk I sit there Pretending to listen Laughing silently I think Of how f*ckin stupid you are For you to think that i actually like you I laugh But not at your weak jokes But at the way you think of me As someone just like you Constantly You're molding me into someone Just like you Now more of me Is slipping away by the second Until I am no more My essence gone My name My face All wiped from the Earth Now I am YOU I have no feelings My soul Empty Empty except all of the worst experiences of my life I suffer Here all alone No happiness No sadness No feelings at all Though there may be light I'm trapped inside my head Pitch black spirits Surrounding me Haunting me Forever with me Never leaving me Me dwelling on this insanity Forever. . . . . Suddenly I feel alert By your touch I scream for no reason At you Yet you don't answer me You ignore me Like everyone else does I scream louder Until it pierces the night sky above And then you finally answer me And you say "Wake up."
The way you compose it makes it flow very well and makes it a lot more powerful. Right on, swell job!