Track 10

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    saunderitos

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    Track 10

    This song is dedicated to the people that have died under G.W.Bush’ signature. Death is overall natural and a good thing. But if someone is willing to sign a form which will cause huge killing a suffering for no justifiable reason, then they are mentally unstable.


    Write your name on the paper
    Hidden behind, bullet-proof draper
    It’s fine though, ‘cause its my destiny
    I’ve nothing to do, just kill the rest of me

    Please cut me loose
    From the noose
    its around my throat
    Singin’ its note

    [In the restaurant of strife
    Where the bill is my life
    The payment is long
    And known as a bomb] Chorus

    The value of the dollar
    is a political collar
    Controlling them
    With a single pen

    [] Chorus


    Go away, go away,go a-WAY


    Track 10 cut.
     
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    heshboy

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    YEAH KILL BUSH!! lol

    Its nice, but if you want great make it longer. Great concept though.
     
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    Ether

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    hmmmm.....good...appeals to me soooo much.....damn bush! Maybe longer could be better though ^_^
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    I also liked it, it ran quite smooth though i too found it a bit too short.
     
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    El Muerto

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    I don't like political songs
     
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    saunderitos

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    thanks for comments,and dusan,if you are going to comment,try and be useful :rolleyes:


    ok,i'll try and make it longer,i was rushin' the length 'cause i was doing it before school
     
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    Ether

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    commenting is my middle name :D

    Nah seriously, it really hits the spot for me....

    ;)
     
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    Arhaz

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    it's a great concept..i liked the whole restaurant part...lol..


    great flow and good job! ^_^
     
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    saunderitos

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    thanks :)
     
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    El Muerto

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    WTF?

    Would you feel better if I just said: Great! or Nice job ;) or something like that.

    I just stated that I don't like politics and songs that relate to it.
    It's has become such a horrible trend to write songs about Bush.
     
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    Luke

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    This is some of the best work I've seen from you,good work :)
     
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    saunderitos

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    WTF?

    Would you feel better if I just said: Great! or Nice job ;) or something like that.

    I just stated that I don't like politics and songs that relate to it.
    It's has become such a horrible trend to write songs about Bush. [/b][/quote]
    no, if you don't like a song because of its topic and are not going to give constructive criticism,don't reply.




    and thanks hellflame
     

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