She liked life up high Too strong to go slow Too young too die Wasn't going to give up Clutched at life with smooth claws Till the last silver teardrop Fell behind closed doors Crystal blue, filled with tears Watched mournfully as Her life flashed, all her years Flew by, not so bad Too fast to live Too young to die But she'd forgotten to give Too late She had lied Too late to live for today Too soon to die for tomorrow She's made another mistake And can't live for the sorrow Did she see it coming? I can't say she did Not until it was too late and she Was caught in Death's iron grip Burned out by the biz Not in the media way Still as popular as ever Though she has passed away A voice like an angel Caught by the devil drink Watch her as she falls slowly Watch her as she thinks Her friends they saw it on the news The fall of a beautiful angel Her family mourn her with tears of blood Past the gates of Heaven she fell "Too late to live for today Too soon to die for tomorrow I've made too many mistakes I can't live for the sorrow"
This one rocks,I liked it very much dunno why, but felt something which I cant express in words about the poem a very different poem I should say,different in the sense the style of the poem is something I havent seen quite often the poem is thoughtful and deep,feels like its based on an incident that you went through or with someone else,anyways I liked the poem very much keep it up.
I really liked it, its a different style from what i write. And im going to change my style now ...cause the last poem i did was QUITE freaky. So what i mean is that i like the way you wrote it. I can imagine it being sung along with a rock band
This one rocks,I liked it very much dunno why, but felt something which I cant express in words about the poem a very different poem I should say,different in the sense the style of the poem is something I havent seen quite often the poem is thoughtful and deep,feels like its based on an incident that you went through or with someone else,anyways I liked the poem very much keep it up. [/b][/quote] agreed, this is awsome but i can't really express it in words. Great stuff. Defenintly LP worthy