Together as one, against all others

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    Zakrisk

    Zakrisk Smoke weed.

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    My little inspirations I add throughout life
    I think I like to sit and take all my time
    To put down in history every little thing
    I guess I could call it my little game

    I hope that you don't find it annoying at all
    That you find yourself hidden in every little song
    That I write. I can't help it. It's sad, yeah, I know,
    But you must not understand how important you are

    I woke up in the morning with a line in my head
    I wake up every morning and lay in my bed
    And I look at the phone and wonder if you'll call
    I'm pathetic, it's 5, and there's no chance at all

    And I laugh to myself, and I go about my day
    And I force myself to make your imprint go away
    It's driving me crazy that I can't get you out
    Of my head. I have tried, and I'm starting to doubt

    That I'll ever be able to move on in life
    I can't believe that I gave so much to this lie
    And I know it's my fault that I cut out my eyes
    Where's the logic in me when it comes to these guys?

    And I guess I could write little tunes all day long
    With obvious rhymes in every love song
    I could use all the lines that have been written before
    To describe all the feelings for the one I adore

    It's my problem, and I know it, I'm telling the world
    I don't care that they know it, I know I won't ever learn
    So there's really no point in hiding behind
    I just need to find someone else with my mind

    Together as one, against all others
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    Awesome piece. In ways, I can really relate. Loved it.

    "I hope that you don't find it annoying at all
    That you find yourself hidden in every little song
    That I write. I can't help it, It's sad, yeah, I know,
    But you must not understand how important you are"

    That part was when it really began to grip me. Because I myself have found that if I were to write something, it would be about my ex...but I don't want to write about her anymore. Because I know I've said all I have to say about that. But I can't seem to focus on anything else.

    I really loved it, overall. Good job.
     

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