Please tell me what you think about this...remember: my language is german, not english...so i can´t write exatly everything down what´s on my mind...so my lyrics are almost in "easy" english... All the time I asked myself what I feel Because the time with you was so unreal It was just too good to feel Like the way I did with you But I never really had a clue I never wanted to have all this pain To be so insecure So disappointed The past get´s me every night But I´m so tired of this tearful fight So I run, and I run, and I run Away from my past Away from me! All I want is just to keep My feelings inside of me So no-one can see What is real and what I feel And I know pretending is what I need To escape in another world This is the place where I belong This is my home I wanted all along You touched my heart right from the start Then you teared it apart But I still try to see the invisible I still try to touch the untouchable I`ll try to find myself tonight I´m searching for hope, clarity and pride The past get´s me every night But I´m so tired of this tearful fight So I run, and I run, and I run Away from my past Away from me! [chorus] I´m so sick...of running away from you I´m so sick...of running away from me I´m so sick...of you I´m so sick...of being myself! [chorus]
wow. i really love it. peace, crawler. nice work. ill look around for more poems by you, dude. and youre english isnt bad. keep up the writing.
totally, this rules. U arent bad at english at all. This is reallllllly good. I wish i had a beat to go with!!!!!!!!!!!1
At first i was expecting somthing sort of, well......crappy,when you said your english wasn't very good.......boy was i wrong. it is REALLY good. i will definately look for more posts. keep writing, it is lyrics like that, that make millions!!!!! 10/10