time moves on

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    iron9567

    iron9567 Well-Known Member

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    verse 1
    stuck in an hour glass with frozen sands
    old memories slowly killing me with each passing day
    drugs have have got a strong hold of you by the hand
    got to get control of these memories, some how some way
    i see your shadow tracing down the hallway floor
    i'm trapted in a house, that was built for you and me
    now this big lonely house doesnt feel the same anymore
    how do i ever figure out how things are really meant to be
    chorus
    verse 2
    it seems like ive yet to learn this lesson meant for my heart
    you say that you dont love me, i cant decide what i want to feel
    i guess ill have to start over and give my heart jump start
    need to quit living in a world i know that wasnt all that real
    all this pain has gotten to be old, need to learn to move on
    dont know if you ever really cared for all that i built for you
    walking through this empty house it's clear that you're gone
    i hate to admit that i still wish we were never really through
    chorus
    verse 3
    through the escape of my day to day job
    the sun's coming up over my back once again
    moving on has never seemed like such a job
    got to find a better way to suffocate all this pain
    as my world falls apart ill stand on top of all the ruble
    i know this world will move on even after my dystruction
    so ive got to learn how to not fall and crumble
    shouldnt leave in your hands the trigger to my dystruction
    chorus
    there's so many things ive learned from my life
    we fall only to get back up and do it all over again
    theres never really any clear answers to make things right
    cant let all your hopes and dreams be covered in pain
    whoever said time stands still for noone, must have known love
    what ive learned in my life has been a complicated story
    with a clock that goes off every morning, ive heard enough
    time is still going to move on even though youre not with me
     
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    Zakrisk

    Zakrisk Smoke weed.

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    Meh, I don't like the rhymes or the rhyme structure.



    :p Just messin'. Good job.
     
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    iron9567

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    the rhyming is off a little bit but oh well im going to rewrite this and put audio to it some day
     
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    Zakrisk

    Zakrisk Smoke weed.

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    Are you a rappa, too?
     
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    iron9567

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    lol im still trying to learn how to speak it faster but i can mainly write it so so
    why
     

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