this is THRU WITH YOU Alone when I was with you I was loosing all that was real to me Now alone without you I feel fulfilled, no more enemies what was between us was called love but truly just another war I gave you everything that I was it was never good enough for you so you took even more and all you gave back was nothing but a dirty pile of lies only now I can see ever so clear how I lost myself just to be with you Those things you wanted me to believe about you they were never true but you thrown a blast of anger when I've seen them thru You thrown a knife and thought I should give up my life to pretend what wasn't real to make you pleased with phony dishonesty that just ain't me so shocked to the core when I thrown you out You should have known I would take no more now you are in the corner licking your wounds spreading webs around to get me back but I'm not of that kind to swim in the river of your world of pretend Ever Again Get it in your head Now I have myself back I will not give who I am away the way I did when I was with you The person I have lost is You and in Truth I am lost to you now comes the classic: any comments please??????
I like it, i like it alot lol, like the feel the poem has, bit of anger and hate if ya ask me, its all good