"This Valentine's Day..."

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    Will

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    "This Valentine's Day, Give Her Something She Really Wants: Love, and Carpeting for Those Creaky Stairs"

    i've been lost in this dream for days
    and there's no sure way out
    because around every corner and behind every wall
    there's an obstacle i can't get past
    and i'm losing sanity slowly but surely.

    i can't progress in a forward motion;
    it's always one step forward -- one step forward
    and two flights of stairs back,
    and i fall to the ground with a thud.

    i've done what i know how to do
    and i'm sure i can do more
    but i don't know what to do to make you see
    that you're absolutely everything to me.

    we don't know each other
    and we've never even hugged
    but i feel a connection deep down;
    maybe you feel it, too,
    but you're afraid.

    don't be afraid.

    maybe it's just my broken heart trying to heal
    or maybe i'm trying to give my heart away too soon;
    but rest assured i feel everything for you
    and i want you to feel it, too --
    there's no better feeling than to be loved.

    there's no pain greater than loving someone
    who won't return the feeling --
    it's a tragedy.

    i've tried to make you see me
    and make my point known
    but it's like you don't hear me
    or see the things i've shown.

    there comes a time and place for lies and deceit
    in the most-serious of situations
    but there's never a time to lead someone on
    and play with their heart,
    to make them feel as though something is there
    only to strike them down with a brunt attack
    and bury their hopes,
    bury their heart --
    bury their everything --
    beneath six feet of earth.

    but maybe i'm moving too fast
    and thinking of the worst-possible situation;
    and yet when i think of the things fast-approaching
    i dream of endless summer nights
    where we could stay up talking,
    listening to our favorite songs
    and quoting lines from those past memories that we love --
    that brings a smile to my face.

    you said you'd be my valentine
    but i'm wondering if you said that out of pity;
    pity for someone who can't do anything right,
    who can't even talk to you when he sees you in person
    but has so many things to say to you
    and to tell you
    that he could write a book
    and title it "for an angel."

    maybe a dozen long-stemmed roses will change your mind
    or the dinner we'll share together
    on the most-romantic of days;
    but if it doesn't prove how much i want to be with you,
    i've only got my words
    and a kiss to end the night.

    those moonlit summer skies look so beautiful
    and your face is shining in the light
    but they'll never happen
    if i keep moving one step forward
    and two flights of stairs back.

    i'm spilling my heart and you don't even see me;
    don't be afraid
    because i'll be here to hold you when you're scared.​
     
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    JJ

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    thats really good will
     
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    Looks like this happens to you. It is so immediate... Thanks:)
     
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    Great job. Sounds really personal.
     
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    Thanks for the comments! It's actually my most-personal piece ever. :)
     
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    No problem. It really did seem to just have a personal feel to it. I can't say why exactly, but the whole thing just didn't seem like it could be fake.
     
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    i liked that
     

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