This Song Fucking Sucks!

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    This is pretty much an self explainatory song. Tell me what you think please.

    This Song Fucking Sucks

    I'm trying to write a great song
    But the words won't come out
    Maybe it's because I'm just so tired
    Or maybe I'm trying to write something that’s not really me
    And I'm becoming another one of the worlds many liars

    Burning flames, random things
    Hawks with broken wings
    Distorted images created by insane entities
    Lights exploding tragically
    Clocks going in reverse
    Random thoughts being wrought
    What message am I conveying?
    And what in the hell am I saying?

    I’m trying to write the best song
    But the words won’t come out
    Maybe it’s because I’m not good enough
    Or maybe I’m not meant to be a writer
    And I’m becoming another one of destiny’s many failures

    Ringing chimes, hopeful minds
    Cats with yellow eyes
    Abstract buildings caught on fire
    Super novas burn up endlessly
    Thief’s stealing everything inhumanly

    Red words on empty screens
    Instruments played for infinity
    Lyrics flowing with the gently wind
    Mothers asking husbands where they’ve been
    Random words being wrought
    I thought I could make something great
    I guess it turns out that I could not
    What message am I conveying?
    And what in hell am I saying?

    This song fucking sucks a lot
    The words blow and the morals rot

    Burning flames, random things
    Hawks with broken wings
    Distorted images created by insane entities
    Lights exploding tragically
    Clocks going in reverse
    Random thoughts being wrought
    What message am I conveying?
    And what in the hell am I saying?​
     
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    El Muerto

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    I really enjoyed reading it, good work :)
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Haha...very clever. I like it a lot ^_^
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    I really enjoyed this<3. I really, really like it.
     

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