this is my depression

i haven't really had much time to write much but i thought i would post this anyway...

Claustrophobic loneliness
Uselessness weighing me down
With a black coal soul
And red rimmed eyes
I have no more to yield

This is my depression

 

Short but powerful.

Good work

 

Short and good.

 

I must agree, it is so short yet i really love this, shows the work of an amazing writer, keep it up

 

thanks all for the comments! didn;t think i would get any but mmmm...

and David, don't know about the amazing writer but thats anyway!

 

you're an amazing writer, and this poem is just another piece of evidence for that...

 

i just felt like adding something
i hope you don't mind cause it's inspired me

don’t have a reason to stay but still I do
i thought that it would be different this time
whatever I am
whoever I am
make me go
make me go away

 

silent sound, thankyou!

dusan, me likey alot!