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    arT saveS

    arT saveS Y2K

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    Eternal death in darkness awaits…
    Clouds of disgust and sickness inside…
    A cavern of hatred, the shadows awaken
    Screaming as betrayal consumes me
    Devoured by hopelessness and despair
    Heaven cannot save this being
    God cannot save me from this hell

    Shadows swallow and scream
    I am choking with my fingers,
    Tangled tightly around my neck
    Taking my last breath…
    I fall into myself…

    My reflection is speaking to me…
    And I cannot fight the urge…
    To speak back…
    So the lies consume me as I take my last breath…
    Falling into myself
    End the suffering…
    Never-ending, bleak and chaotic

    Shadows weep and whimper…
    As you lose yourself within…
    Swimming in the depths of everything…
    Taking my last breath…
    I fall into oblivion…
     
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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    arT saveS, YOU ARE NOW DEEMED POETIC PRESIDENT OF WRITERS COVE. Now may you have a nice day Mr/Mrs President.
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    u r really good !
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Nice to read something new by you, i know you'll be able to write less often now so it's good to see you found some time to come up with something amazing like always. ;)

    Did you get a chance to enter the poetry contest?
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you all for the replies.

    David: I didn't even know there was a poetry contest. :p
     

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