This is a piece I've just finished. I've got a guitar part for it but due to the untimely death of my microphone I can't get it recorded any time soon. Hope you like it though and don't hesitate to post comments or give me some tips, etc. Thanks Note: The writing in italics is echoed "The Writh And Fall Parts I and II" I need to yawn but you won't let me, So I'll sleep until oxygen fills my lungs, And the rest of my body just can't keep up, And I start writhing 'round and speaking in tongues, This sickness all round consumes me, And it'll never let me go until it's done it's work, You sit and watch me breathing, Can you see the agony and the blood soaking my shirt? This is love. Roll me over, my teeth are falling out, This can't look good from your point of view, So imagine how this feels for me, You gave me this, there's nothing I can do, Except die or writh around until I choke, Which will also lead to death, I really do not have a choice right now, So I say I love you too and then I hold my breath, Why did you... Fall in love, With this wretched fuck, I've told you a million times I don't deserve this, But you fall in love, I guess I'm out of luck, All I can do is writh around my bed. My fingernails are breaking and snapping off, I'm itchy all over and my throat is dry as fuck, My eyes are so damn painful and their pupils are so large, That the black is taking over all of my eyeball, There's no colour left, what have you done? You turn the light on to see the damage caused, I'm sprawling round this bed looking for comfort I haven't got, Then I stop just look enough to catch your eye, who would have thought. You'd fall in love, With this wretched fuck, I've told you a million times I don't deserve this, But you fall in love, I guess I'm out of luck, All I can do is writh around my bed. Now we see the light, Now we see the light, Now we see the light, And it hurts our eyes, Now you see my pain, Now you see my pain, Now you see my pain, Does this have a name? Does this mean, there's no cure, Except to just give in, except to just say it? Does this mean, that I'm screwed? I can't talk to you, I guess I'm doomed, So I'll lay down, and stare at the light, I'll just give in, there's no point trying to fight, Sorry I can't say, those words back to you, Please turn off the light, I've got bruises to hide and symptyms too. Now that we see the light, Now we see the light, Now we see the light, And it hurts our eyes, Now you see my pain, Now you see my pain, Now you see my pain, Does this have a name? Now we see the light...
RIP Dedicated's microphone. Honestly, I don't think this is your best piece, it doesn't flow very well, but it's still pretty good.
Thanks for the comments. When I sort myself out I'll try to get to my mates and use his recording stuff to put the actual song together. I'll probably edit some of the lyrics aswell. Thanks for the comments