The World Behind the Chaos

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    arT saveS

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    Anarchy forbids beauty to show her lovely face
    Blue skies that open their warm arms welcome me…
    The grace of the wind that touches my flesh…
    Smiling down upon me…
    I pray that I will never make the mistake…
    To be as selfish as those who are so ungrateful
    Those who paint visions of blood spilled hate
    Or to try and take my own life…
    The side of the world that we will never know
    That is hidden and tucked away unknown
    We must see past all of the distorted chaos
    Can we not just take the time to notice…
    Isn’t it amazing how something so immovable as a tree…
    Dances and sways to the rhythm of the wind
    Even though darkness casts clouds of rain
    To veil the peacefulness of our saddest of days
    It is still there under snow-covered blankets…
    Watching over us as sky opens to the heavens.


    Thanks to david for the title. :)
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Great poem, not 100% sure i'd call it a happy poem but i deffinently not one of your darest poems. and it does highlight the good things in life. Great work. Nice poem

    This bit is my fave
    just great work. hey and thanks for mentioning me, u didn't have to. Another great poem.
     
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    fallenangel

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    wow, the use of imagery in this one is fantastic!

    me likey alot!

    this bit is simply beautiful.
     
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    One of your best, you show alot of tallent here, I love it!
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you everyone. :)
     

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