The Undying Oath

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    sickcycle

    sickcycle Well-Known Member

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    The Undying Oath

    Despair in a ray of sunshine
    A day dons on the promise made long ago
    Dreams always floated in the wind, but now nightmares intertwine

    In the sands of the sea our innumerous heresies veiled
    But the seas have become sand and hope is dry and folly found

    Disorder in a drop of rain
    The ending from a higher being shown forth
    Lightning in a breath gives light to the slain

    Praying to nameless stars for saving grace
    But the stars pray to the Name and hide their face

    Demise in a blast of thunder
    A quake-ridden earth, filled with bodies, will know only sorrow
    Grimacing faces peer upon the carnage and shudder

    A chosen savor is cried to for life everlasting
    But this savor is crying, for death has come knocking
     
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    Jon[athan]

    Jon[athan] Sincerly, written from my brothers blood machine.

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    wow...that kinda reminded me of the extra track on stone sour:stone sour, where corey has this poetry thing he reads. pretty good.
     
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    LP_Freak_2735

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    Great work, as always.
    I love it! ^_^
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Ahh, your work never fails to amaze me. ^_^
     
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    sickcycle

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    again, thanks to you all for the replies
     
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    NofxPants

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    Great Work!
     
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    sickcycle

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    thanks, and awesome avatar!
     

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