I look at the life I have Wondering if this life is good or bad You say its good But I think worse I shout and scream But I'm never heard I want to go to a different world Where I'm treated fairly,where know I am heard I know there are others like me Who sit and scream and cry all nightly You call this a happy life? When my third eye is firmly shut tight I fall down in pain on the floor Trying to make sense of all these metaphors All this prophicy Trigonomitry all your philosophies Mean nothin' to me I'm tired of being left on the ground I shouldn't have to be in the lost and found I need my respect My dignity All those who feel the same must sing with me! Sitting there like you own me Well I've got news for you I want the years back that you owe me Why do you do... the things that you do My whole life was a success to you But how many times must I stress to you That the pains inside Why do you think cry It shows the signs Of all the lies Tension builds up as I sink low What do I have to do to let you know? That this is my time that I need help This excitment does not conjure my hope So I'll continue to scream and still be unheard But all this BullSh*t isn't what I deserve How dare you leave me to rot away How dare you ignore all the things I say Why do you wanna be so cruel to me Why can't you come and please help me I need this help your the only one Who can help me out and stop havin' fun Cos its you I need no matter how cruel you are So I make a wish to the shooting star Sitting there like you own me Well I've got news for you I want the years back that you owe me Why do you do... the things that you do Sitting there like you own me Well I've got news for you I want the years back that you owe me Why do you do... the things that you do You can free me (yeah...) Your the only one Please Your the only one Free me from this evil machine Free me Free me! Sitting there like you own me Well I've got news for you I want the years back that you owe me Why do you do... the things that you do Sitting there like you own me Well I've got news for you I want the years back that you owe me Why do you do... the things that you do
Can some people please comment on this because this is probably the first song we're gonna do and we need to know if its good lyrics
A lot of spelling and grammatical errors but overall it was a decent piece. "I want the years back that you owe me" was my favorite line.
hmm, well i didn't get the trigonmetry part and it seemed to kinda contradict itself by saying stuff like "I want the years back that you owe me" and showing indignation and then kind begging almost by saying "Your the only one Please". but it was not bad.
Its meant to contradict itself,its like the person saying it is taking back what he/she said because he/she hates this person but needs them in their life. But thanks for the comments,much appreiciated