the spark...

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    Sakshi

    Sakshi Well-Known Member

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    The Spark



    Today i declare i feel elated;
    but hey its not bcoz of the guy i dated.
    for once it doesnt seem to be dark;
    something i truly feel had left its mark.

    people finally think i'll do well in life;
    have loads of money,fame and a knife.
    their talks earlier used to act like a knife;
    for me a disgrace, a matter of strife.

    but now i feel confident,strong and sure;
    i guess i've finally found my cure.
    I'll dare and I'll win and i'll never be wrong;
    I'll definitely try to be perfectly headstrong.

    ok,enough,i am trying to be too optimistic;
    trying to act properly, be catalystic.
    whatever it may be,i've got the mark;
    i've finally found the ultimate spark!

    (MORNING ELATION)
    by sakshi
     
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    Janie Jones

    Janie Jones Meghna is a Headcase

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    It's cool. Not very impressive lyrically, but it's simpllicity makes it a very appealing read. Infact, if you work onnit a lil more then it could tun out to be a nice motivational verse. Try and work it into a song, it'll be good with soft bubblegum rock grunge beats!
     

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