.:The Silence Between Two Keyboards:.

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Tim2, Dec 21, 2003.

  1. #1
    Tim2

    Tim2 Ambient

    Joined:
    Feb 8, 2003
    Messages:
    1,178
    Likes Received:
    2



    .:The Silence Between Two Keyboards:.

    December twentith
    Delievered up on my doorstep
    An angel wrapped up tight
    Between two sheets of plastic
    'Fragile' reads the note clipped on her
    And so her wings held
    Together by scotch
    And her halo bound
    Together by duct

    Cross the wire
    Are you my savior?
    Your hand into mine
    Stings the palm
    Beautiful you are here tonight
    But don't fade from me
    Just like all the others

    In this cold nights chill
    Our breath floats off into the sky
    Like the balloon that slipped
    From your fingers when you were five
    Snow falls all around us
    And the from town hall
    The clock hits three
    Come along and take my hand
    And I'll lead you up to your window

    Cross the wire
    Are you my savior?
    Your hand into mine
    Stings the palm
    So beautiful you are here tonight
    But don't fade from me
    Just like all the others

    The arc in your smile
    Shows how it's both received
    And her words slowly melting
    Into the oblivion between my lungs
    The gleem from her eyes
    Illuminates everything she set focus upon
    Wrap me up in this ribbon
    And I'll dress your wounds
    Can I hold you tonight?

    Cross the wire
    Are you my savior?
    Your hand into mine
    Stings the palm
    So beautiful you are here tonight
    But don't fade from me
    Just like all the others

    Quarters and dimes reflect off
    The bottom of the pond
    Glazed with a thin layer of ice
    But our reflections don't reflect as two
    But instead in the form of one whole figure
    She says ''In a perfect world we wouldn't exist''
    And well here we are and I see no destruction
    She says 'Beauty is only skin deep'
    And well I'm seeing nothing but skin on you
     
  2. #2
    Will

    Will LPA Addicted VIP LPA Addicted VIP

    Joined:
    Aug 25, 2002
    Messages:
    35,486
    Likes Received:
    37



    Wow.

    That's all I can say.

    Wow.
     
  3. #3
    Anthony.

    Anthony. .Orestes LPA Super VIP

    Joined:
    Aug 25, 2003
    Messages:
    5,600
    Likes Received:
    16



    :mellow: :eek: (w00t) .

    This is amazing :D . Excellent work!

    Is it really about a keyboard? I'm lost into the metaphors :D .
     
  4. #4
    Andrea

    Andrea best friends. LPA Addicted VIP

    Joined:
    Dec 12, 2002
    Messages:
    34,338
    Likes Received:
    332



    Incredible! Great usage of words. Excellent job, Tim! ;)
     
  5. #5
    BEAVIS

    BEAVIS Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2003
    Messages:
    197
    Likes Received:
    0



    Cooooooooooooooool ^_^
     
  6. #6
    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Feb 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,483
    Likes Received:
    1



    Its like Maynard crossed with Pink Floyd or something! :p

    Amazing!!! I love the last two lines especially. That was a masterwork.
     

Share This Page