The Second Most Serious Poem Ever

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    Will

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    Okay, this is the second part of "The Most Serious Poem Ever." If you never read it, too bad. Here it goes!

    "The Second Most Serious Poem Ever"

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I'll fuck you with a rake






    Please comment!!!
     
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    OMG!!! THAT IS AMAZING! Simply your best work yet Will, I can't believe the skill that went into that.

    I love the "roses are red" line, 'cause that's like so true. Because if red roses weren't red, then what color would they be? I mean wtf.
     
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    Wow man, that flowed so eloquently! That's like the most awesome thing ever! :lol:
     
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    wow, nice :lol:
     
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    LMFAO.




    You rock.




    :lol:
     
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    very deep. i like the line 'ill #### you with a rake', because its so realistic. you know, its just thoughtful... it tells us a lot about this world. :lol: it rocks will :lol:
     
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    :eek: Will, do you know that you are very talented. I mean very talented! *jealous, jealous* :chemist:




    ROFL :lol:
    Will rules :lol:
     
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    whahahaha.......*can't stop laughing*
    ROFL, Will you're a very lovely poemwriter. :lol:
     
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    :eek: .............. :rawk:
     
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    :lol: :lol: :lol:




    best poem I've ever read :p
     
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    WILL....THE MAN IS A LEG-END
     
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    :lol: :lol: :lol:
     
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    wait, how exactly do you fuck someone with a rake?
     
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    Do you honestly want to know? :wth:
     
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    LOL. That's incredible!
     
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    um.. youre right, nevermind :wth:
     
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    Even thinking about getting ####ed with a rake makes me queasy. Seriously just think about it- Ouch. >_<
     
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    omg I cant believe you actually had to ask that :x :lol:
     
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    omg I cant believe you actually had to ask that :x :lol: [/b][/quote]
    man, i cant stop thinking about it :'(
     
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    That would seriously hurt. :lol:
     
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