The Saddest Christmas, Ever.

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    Will

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    The Saddest Christmas, Ever.

    Look outside, and tell me what you see—
    A winter wonderland, or a world of misery?
    The window fogs up as he breathes
    Against the cold glass, looking at the trees.
    His daddy promised that there would be lights in them
    This year so that they would stand out when
    Santa Claus came to deliver his presents from space.
    But now, tears are rolling down his face
    Because his daddy is never coming home—
    Killed in a war, leaving his boy all alone.
    The trees are lightless, and there are no decorations.
    Mother sits in the kitchen wanting reparations.
    Her husband is gone and her son has no dad…
    It was the saddest Christmas they’d ever had.
     
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    Great work :)
     
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    Interesting poem Will, different choice of perspective in this one. 10/10.
     
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    Aw, that is so sad. But another piece of great work. Good one Will.
     
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    Oh my gosh, I really like this one. It's so sad. :'(
     
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    :'(
    Amazing, so sad, I liked it alot...
     
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    Thats fucking amazing, Have you ever looked into getting your work Published?
     
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    Very sad,very good :)
     
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    :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
    Upsettin but very good
     
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    Thanks for all the comments. :)
     
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    No,thank you for sharing that with us :)
     
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    Will, you are a genius.
     
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    Thanks. :)
     

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