I actually wrote it for my (poetry) site, but why not post it here? It's about life... I have walked this road before A never ending road I didn't know where I walked it for A never ending road A road of love, A road of hate A road of God, a road of faith On the end of the road I see an angel and the light on the end of the road I feel the end of the eternal fight The end of all the madness on this place Forgetting all the things you had to face A place where you can forget the hate The place you will find your faith I want to see the end I want to see the eternal land I know it's waiting for me to say That this land will go never away So I keep walking a thousend miles a day I have no one to tell and nothing to say So I keep walking a thousend miles a day With nothing to tell and nothing to say I wont take a shortcut, no I will not I will finished this fair, just like God I will walk the road with all my friends Untill it stops, untill it ends (I know it sucks, but hey, I'm 14 years old, and I'm actually dutch ) (is that a good excuse?)
Hey I'm 14 years old and actualy English Its good and I like it,its very like Green Day's 'Boulevard Of Broken Dreams' and a little like one of my bands song's we're working on (lyrics will be posted soon!) but it is good
very nice, but i am always a sucker for good poetry! being only 14 and writing this shows you have talent, i'm 16 and wish i wrote like that two years ago
Nice poem If you turned it into a song it'd sound great, imo. LOL looks like we're all 14-year olds here.