THE REVEAL - New Original Song

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    hawk

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    hawk, Jul 2, 2011



    This is my first original song.
    I began using a new program and this is the first song I've made using it.

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    LISTEN & DOWNLOAD

    My future songs should be better as I get better at using the program, and music itself.
     
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    El Muerto

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    El Muerto, Jul 2, 2011



    I gotta say this is pretty boring, but keep practising :)
     
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    LOL, yeah. It's the same throughout the whole song pretty much.
     
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    Super Sonic, Jul 2, 2011



    Its quite good just a bit repetitive.
     
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    travz21, Jul 4, 2011



    This type of song definitely needs vocals. Whenever it feels repetitive it needs some lyrics to spice things up.

    Other than that I think it's an acceptable instrumental.
     
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    hawk, Jul 4, 2011



    Yeah, that's the same thing my brother said.
     

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