The Poisonous Tree

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    Jabble524

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    The Poisonous Tree

    The reaper leaves us
    A trail of common sense
    That leads to the grave

    Divorced from reason
    I nail my soul, to the devil’s altar
    In shadows and lust

    Your lips on my skin
    Are clever catalysts for chaos
    Sweet ecstasy, until the sunrise betrays us

    In the cold light of day
    Happiness and pleasure
    Are seldom synonymous

    Denial is the architect of illusion
    I can only look in the mirror
    When I manipulate my reflection
     
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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    I really like this. Great language and imagery. :)
     
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    Jabble524

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    Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. I appreciate it.
     
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    Jabble524

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    Insomnia

    Romance awakens the unconscious
    And in heartbreak it never sleeps
    An insomnia of revelations
    Shattered promises, we swore to keep

    Paper tigers and Icarus wings
    Fly to the sun, when the siren sings
    Oedipus eyes to navigate the maze
    False bravado, caught in the minotaur’s gaze

    Your Prometheus Kiss
    Stole the fire from my heart
    The eagle is my friend
    But you tear me apart

    Luscious lips and Freudian slips
    Red herrings lead me between your legs
    Denial is a warm bed, and a lustful lover
    On a night of cold truth
     
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    El Muerto

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    Fucking ace man, I especially love the second one. Great wording, no forced rhyming, it all just flows perfectly. Keep it up!
     
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    Jabble524

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    Thanks Dusan.
     
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    Faithful

    Faithful

    Honesty is a disgusting creature, that we decorate with lies
    Desires become more destructive, when they’re locked up inside
    We believed that fidelity was necessary, until we looked into strange eyes
    But we ignored the jealous undertow, and the changing of the tides

    Their lips on your skin
    My hands on strange flesh
    Suspicion slithered into our minds
    Poisoned our trust, and caused us to question things
    That we thought were set in stone
     

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