The Peaceful Storm

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    The Peaceful Storm



    I want to sit under Department stores shade
    Away from the gloom that the clouds sometime bring
    To watch as the rain showers soak the ground
    And as the thunder roars with impossible breath
    I wonder about the people that are fast asleep with the paradoxical comfort
    Maybe the Grey dew outside is seducing them like a sedative
    Because even when night falls, enveloping everything in sight
    People are fast asleep and go on dreaming peacefully

    I want to walk down roads I've never walked on
    On that ominous path leading up the mountain
    Where there is no life other than the wild
    I want to walk the line between here and there
    Even though I'm afraid too

    Is it strange that the day light scares me more?
    You can see the faces of evil not hidden
    Unlike the soothing comfort of darkness that's like a protective curtain
    I want to sit under the shade where the cool breeze stays

    Away from the gloom and into the dark shadows
    To watch as the rain taps merrily on the asphalt
    And as the lighting displays fireworks in the sky
    I should be frightened but the display is too beautiful
    I should be inside but the storm draws me closer
    And as the door behind me opens, people walk out of the stores air conditioning
    And to their cars trying to protect themselves from the dangerous storm
    My eyes watch them lazily as I sit under the Department stores shade


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    Linja

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    I like it. It's a lot like a stream of consciousness.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Yeah it's a great piece, I really like the athmosphere it makes
     
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    Babali

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    There's some really amazing poetry on this forum. This was amazing to read. I loved it. Excellent job! :D

    Much love, Babali
     

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