The Pale Moon

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    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

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    Staring at the sky
    Time passes me by
    Caught in an embrace
    A murmur of a lullaby and
    The pale moon shines
    It smiles as I contrive
    The way world will be

    As the stars come and go
    Our lives a distant memory
    Leaves falling and day fading
    Seems like a sorrowful end
    Then I reflect and leave no regrets
    Seeing new constellations grow
    As others whither and die

    Wrinkled and worn I am
    Spectator of the knarled trees
    Even I am fading too
    Turning grey as concrete
    Numb but still hanging on
    My duty is incomplete
    I must find the truth
    Before I'm gone in the breeze

    Reaching out to the crisp air
    I cannot describe the feeling
    At one time I feel despair
    Yet, your voices are my ecstacy
    Their must be a purpose to this
    I set my eyes upon the stars once more
    The answer is closer then I believe

    The water lapping up on the beach
    I can feel the tide rising
    Feel the moon riding
    Around earth again tonight
    I know what it all means
    As I float away with the foam
    Into the depths of oceans night

    Very introspective and 'natural'....I was listening to Opeth (more below) and it was such a moving experience I had to write something....

    (I was listening to Opeth's 'To Bid You Farewell'. This may be the most beautiful song I have heard in my life. That was from their 2nd album, Morningrise, and people have said: 'If Beethoven, Mozart, and Bach were alive today and made metal, they would have created Morningrise...' I now agree with them, just listen to this track...you won't be sorry)
     
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    Glenn

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    That's awesome! Very descriptive Free-Verse! :p 10/10
     
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    Anya

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    That was..beautiful. :eek:
     
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    Methybrea

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    Thanks! ^_^

    Any more comments, anybody? :)
     
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    (w00t) You're extremely talented. It's so pretty! I loved that. Great job :D
     
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    Alacrity

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    :eek: Awesome.Beautiful.Speechless
     
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    Methybrea

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    :blush: Aw, thanks all!
     
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    I'm listening to 'Blackwater Park' as I read this. This is so darn amazing! :eek: You're an awesome writer.
     

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