The Only Way: No one knows. No one would care. But this knife... It's always there. I need it to go on. I need it to belong. It's my friend. Only when I cut, does the pain end. Only then can once incurable wounds mend. No where else to turn. While for acceptance I yearn. My body worn. My soul forlorn. I need the pain. Need it to stay sane. As I'm bleeding, I'm releasing. The only way. Review? pretty please? oh, and i dont mind constructive criticisim. i wanna know what u reely think. good/bad/whatever
I used to write half-decent poems before I moved to songs. Not much difference. Sometimes you got a little too wordy for my taste, and I can have long lines, it's just I lost your rhythm. Other than that, the depth and the vision are clear and focused. (8/10)
In all seriousness I think you might want to consult a doctor (that is if you cut) Cutting is someting very serious, you may think the pain ends but it only builds. What happens someday if you are drunk or high and really mad about whatever the circumstances that make you cut? you may end your life with that knife, it is not your friend, but your enemy. Jonathan
no, i dont cut but ive had lots of experience w/cutting through some friends of mine i know how serious it is and thats why i write/read about it a lot because i want 2 inform people about it. one thing ill never understand is that people who strave themselves or whatever arent looked at as freaks, they're looked at people who need help and support. but the minute someone tells another person they're a "cutter" they think "omg, you're a freak, stay away from me"(ive seen this w/my friends) and i sit there and im like its the same as those who strave themselves or make themselves throw up...its even the same as those who kill themselves from doing drugs...its all inflicting harm on urself...so thats why i wrote that peom...not 2 make "cutting" more acfeptable(its not acceptable) but 2 inform more people about it so they dont automatically think "you're a freak, leave me alone"..thats the last thing a cutter needs...