The Once Existed

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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Standing poised upon her grave
    He allowed the grief tainted fog
    To engulf the ground that was blood stained
    With hate, self-pitty and a broken conscience
    A profound hell was one perspective

    "Tis but a dream," he sputtered
    As the sword hit the stone
    Promise, insight and peace lay
    In shards
    He glared at the fallen sword
    And at the thought did he shutter.
    What had been his cold awakening
    Hybrid of pain, in silver pieces began to be
    washed away by the mournful rain.

    He tried to repress thoughts of doom and destruction
    Trying to bring forth his thoughts of raptured life
    In full frontal ressurrection.
    "Confession," He whispered as he left all behind him
    "Obsession," he thought, as he walked away, silent and blind.

    Truth fading away, each and every step
    A silent secret of regret, was now forever kept,
    With each heavy breath he took.
    The transgressive moon now running out of time
    As the seductive stars begin to dim.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good Job.
     
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    bravo! very good!
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    That's definitely a compliment coming from you :p

    Thanks for the comments guys ^_^
     

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