The Ocean's Latest Victim of Love

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    Will

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    The Ocean's Latest Victim of Love

    Ocean waves crash upon the shore
    Creating this, my place of solitude
    This place where I walk is my peace
    My solidarity transcends me
    Approaching the waves, my toes curl up
    The cold breeze nips at my feet
    I can feel the breadth of the water
    Its expansiveness stretched out before me
    The clouds overhead pull a blanket over the moon
    Light around me collapses
    Shadows wrap themselves around me
    I think they’re trying to keep me warm
    I’m reminded of that nightmare I had some weeks ago
    I was drowning
    No one was around to save me
    But for some reason, I am at peace
    I want to embrace the waves as they embrace me
    I stand here, a broke embodiment of what I used to be
    Can you hear my screaming?
    The moonlight reveals itself once again
    My shadow casts out for the waves
    The water is up to my knees now
    Each breath grows weaker and bleeds
    I can feel the warmth of the sand between my toes
    Or maybe it’s because I can’t feel my feet at all
    My senses shattered, I revel in myself
    I’m still completely at ease
    It’s as if nothing could deter me from this goal
    Waste-deep, I can feel my breath growing shorter
    Someone on shore is calling for me
    I can’t hear what they’re saying
    But it sounds like “I love you, come back”
    I can’t be certain, nor do I ever want to find out
    This is the only conquest I must make
    The only path I can take
    To the bottom of the ocean I go
    The water’s up to my chest
    And my chest grows tighter, suffocating me
    My arms are still above water but they’ll be below soon enough
    Let me die
    Please, just let me die
    This sweet suffocation is all that I ask for
    You, my ghost of perfection
    Let the roses fall onto the dirt covering me
    Give me one good reason to come back
    Give me one good reason why you fell for me
    Give me one good reason why I fell for you
    Give me one good reason why you should die for me
    My reason as to why I’d die for you is simple
    I love you
    This is how I’ll prove it
    I’ll take my own life
    Maybe then you’ll see how much I love you
    “I love you, come back” I hear again
    I ignore it
    The water’s up to my chin now and my arms are underwater
    I can’t feel them
    I can’t feel anything
    I can see my breath in front of me
    I have to remember to die
    Just remember to die
    Let me die
    I see your face
    Reflecting this oasis
    Your eyes paralyze me
    My lungs fill with your hatred
    But I love you
    This is how I’ll prove it
    Drowning myself in your blood-soaked memories
    I never hurt you
    Don’t blame me for your past
    I love you
    This is how I’ll prove it
    Shed the memories when you cry
    Stare at me on your descent
    These currents pull me under
    I can feel the undertow
    I’m gone
    Underwater
    Let me die
    I love you




    Note: The title makes sense if you think of the game show "Wheel of Fortune" and its category "Before and After." The first half is "the ocean's latest victim" and the second half is "victim of love."
     
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    Intence.............





    This poem was truly amazing. One of the best i've read in a while. I really can't explain how it has made me feel, i'm am awed by this poem........left speachless.
    Just amazing......... this truely is a masterpiece. It's brilliant.
     
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    That's what you always get from him ^_^

    Amazing job as always Will.
     
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    *sniff* I love this, it's beautiful.
     
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    Thanks for the comments.
     

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