Ok, this the first song I've ever recorded. It has some flaws in it like I messed up a bit of the guitar on the 2nd verse and at the start and end. I also recorded it using a crap mic but whatever. Also it's an acoustic Hear the song! The lyrics are here: The Nearby Fall Of Darkness Can anybody hear me? Can anybody see? The weight on my shoulders, That's killing me, But nobody seems to care, If I am doomed, Takin' you with me, Nothin' else to do. Sadness nearing you, You got nothin' to do, Broken down onto the floor, But no one liked you, Nobody seems to care, If I am doomed, Takin' you with me, Nothin' else to do. Did you just call out my name? I'm not playing your games, Our life has changed, It's not the same, And nobody seems to care, If I am doomed, Takin' you with me, Nothin' else to do. Battered on the inside, Bruised on the outside, It hurts so badly, But nowhere to hide, The nearby fall of darkness, Has come, You need help, So come and get some. And nobody seems to care, If I am doomed, Takin' you with me, Nothin' else to do, The nearby fall of darkness, Has come, You need help, So come and get some. The nearby fall of darkness, Breaks out, It's no use, To scream or shout, The nearby fall of darkness, Breaks out, It's no use, To scream or shout. And nobody seems to care, If I am doomed, Takin' you with me, Nothin' else to do, The nearby fall of darkness, Has come, You need help, So come and get some. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Hope you like it
I can't seem to download it. Edit: Whoops nevermind. Double Edit: Hey, I like your song, man. The only thing I can say is that perhaps you should add different things like bridges, or choruses, because the same type of verses does get a bit redundant. Other than that, I really like this. Nice lyrics and you sound good.
If you've got MSN *goes and checks something* you have so I'll send you the song over MSN Everyone else: Thanks for the replies