The Murderer & The Saviour

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    A very short poem I wrote. Pls Comment


    The Murderer & The Saviour

    A pair, oval holes, so whole. So deep
    The brown that I had fallen into. And was covered in
    No breath yet still, I caught mine
    Alive, I swam back to safety
    Dead, Alive, I struggled to regain consciouness
    But in the end you eyes had saved me
     
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    Gloomy Mushroom

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    Nice.
     

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