The Joker

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    Will

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    The Joker

    Honesty played a trump card against me that day;
    I thought I had the Dealer beat with a full house,
    but He trounced me with a royal straight flush
    and I’m still reeling from the loss.
    He brought us together at the table one day
    and soon after made me feel like the King
    whereas you beside me were my Queen.
    But now I see that I’m nothing more than a Joker,
    always discarded from the deck
    before the game ever even begins.
    That’s the last time I’m going to be honest
    when a game that important is on the line.
    It doesn’t matter how far we’ve come
    or the time span it took us to get here.
    The only thing that matters is that the Dealer beat me
    after He made me feel like nothing could touch me.
    Now I see why I don’t pray to Him:
    He builds me up and tears me back down
    right when I’m at the top of my game—
    like the Joker discarded from the deck.
     
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    That was the most awsome poem.. I have ever read.


    Me = Speechless :eek:
     
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    Thanks, Anya. :)
     
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    No problem. Just keep writing I love it. :D
     
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    thats awsome, really cool use of analogy :D
     
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    That poem owns everyone and their moms.

    That was awesome, Will. Awesome.
     

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