The Fate of the Last Three Words You Said to Me

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    Will

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    "The Fate of the Last Three Words You Said to Me"

    Choke on all the things you've said to me
    Fuck your lies and the life you stole from me
    It's your fault these walls now surround me
    Don't you see the things you've done to me

    This is the way you tore me down
    And took my passion away
    These are the things you said
    That took my passion away

    "I'm not backing down this time. I'm not giving in. I swear I won't let you inside one more time. No, I'd much rather die than hold your hand again. But I might change my mind if I can help you off that cliff. You're a poison arrow and I won't stand for this. No, not this time."

    Think of all the things you've said to me
    Three small words that meant so much to me
    One large lie that did so much to me
    Don't you see the things you've done to me

    This is the way you tore me down
    And took my passion away
    These are the things you said
    That took my passion away
     
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    Linja

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    Simple and forceful.
     
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    Hehe, thank you.

    It's sort of a framework for how I want the vocals to sound for a song I'm writing on guitar. The lyrics probably won't be the same once the song's completely written. They're way too cliché. :lol:
     
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    Hey, I like cliché. Cliché is cheesy cool! I'm sure the song'll sound great on guitar.
     

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