the face inside.

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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    here we go again....lol


    The face inside.

    Unload what disturbs you,
    When you finally have to let it all out,
    It’ll come as to get to you,
    None can hear you, though you shout.
    Don’t pretend to be okay,
    You know you can’t fool me,
    I’m that face follows your way,
    I’m what you are to keep.
    You tell yourself to be prepared,
    Time is not on your side,
    You are losing grip, you’re dared
    To give up what you have inside.
    I’m your parasite,
    I need you to live,
    I feed on your every mistake,
    Recurring mistakes is what I give.
    Lend me your mind,
    Lend me your rotten self
    I’ll hide behind,
    I know you need my help.



    it's very very random....but tell me what you think of it...lol
     
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    MeLiS_

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    (w00t) (w00t) :lol: ^_^
     
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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    Likewise. :D
     
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    Arhaz

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    lol, thanks.... ;)
     
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    fallenangel

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    this was good! sound like your feeding on someone else's pain. just a thought but otherwise, i like it. ;)
     
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    Arhaz

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    thankie.... ^_^
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Pretty good.
     
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    ahamLP

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    Cool,awesome,very different,and a poem to which I can relate to,every single word everything said in the poem is something that I can relate to.Great write,hope to see more,keep it up.
     
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    Arhaz

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    really???^^^
    cool!
    thanks so much!!! ^_^
     

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