The End of Pessimism

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Something a little different.

    The End of Pessimism

    Mark went to optimistic town
    And left with a goal in mind
    Riding on the track of pride
    Cause no one ever told him no

    And if he had to ask
    Where would the answer be

    And where would it be
    now that the green has become brown?
    A thousand coins
    Lost with nothing found

    Stuck on adobe hills
    As high as an boundless feet
    Aimed for the highest deed
    But slid down so carelessly

    Now the rail is a slope
    And a spiral
    Spiraling down

    He slept at night on adobe hills
    Made of a sulfric clay

    He sleeps forever now


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    Dean

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    I like it. It seems like a lot of thought went into it although so does all of your writing usually.
     

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