The deepest song i've ever written

This took me 2 minutes to write, and I JUST wrote it. Tell me what you think..

I wish this state of fear would go away,
away from me,
half-heartedly I take wonder and happiness into my life,
but throw it all away,
it's useless to think i'll make it through allright,
thoughts of pain and anger,
numbing my life,
make it all go away with the blade of the knife,


make it go away
make it go away
(I can't take it anymore)


make it go away
make it go away
(I can't take it anymore)

you think if your in my mind,
you lift my spirits and i'll survive,
realize that your the reason,
I hate to be alive,
I doesn't matter if you even exsist,
you exist only in the minds of those who need to resist
and..
(repeat chorus)

(this is currently unfinished)

 

Wow,it's great!
I really can relate to it...

 

w.....ow

 

does that mean you like it?

 

i really like it

 

That's pretty damn tight...

 

I like!

 

this is the most comments i've ever gotten for a song, wow.. :chemist:

 

holay shiznatolay!! thats the best songolay i have heard in a long time...olay!!



I CANT GET BULL FIGHTING OUT OF MY HEAD


...i like your sig...

 

That was strange! But thankyou for the comment on the song and sig

 

That's really good. Write some more for it and add it..

 

Thanks Amy, i'll be doing that soon. I haven't finished the whole thing yet..my evil parents have been making me do homework and grounding me constantly so it's hard to find time these days <_<

 

Yeah,keep on writing!

 

Allright, will do

 

This song reminds me of one I wanted to write, but I never got around to putting it on some paper. It's very well done.

 

That was strange! [/b][/quote]
Sowwy.





















lol.

But yeah it's a really good song. Can't wait to hear some more.



And im over bullfighting!!!

 

Sowwy.





















lol.

But yeah it's a really good song. Can't wait to hear some more.



And im over bullfighting!!! [/b][/quote]
toro toro andale andale! :chemist: :wth:














Bullfighting is the sh*t don't worry

 

that's awesome!!! keep it up!

 

I think it is pretty good, I love the chorus part

 

I added more to it in another thread I made long ago. If you'd like to comment read the one with the added version I made lol.


extended version