"The Carolina Sun" (new version)

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    Will

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    "The Carolina Sun" (new version)

    And we watched as the Carolina sun
    Scared away the clouds on the horizon
    We chased it to the California coast
    And watched it burn up and become a ghost

    The morning breeze played with her hair
    As I breathed in the clean sea air
    The sand was cold between my toes
    I passed to her a deep red rose
    I took her hand, placed it in mine
    And then her hair began to shine
    Here comes the sun, the day is new
    And this is too good to be true
    The clouds they parted, disappeared
    And then the glowing sun appeared
    I pulled her close and kissed her hard
    I knew the day would not be marred

    And we watched as the Carolina sun
    Scared away the clouds on the horizon
    We chased it to the California coast
    And watched it burn up and become a ghost

    We drove across the Texas plains
    With our blood boiling in our veins
    And we were nearly halfway there
    When I became so well-aware
    Our trip would take more than a day
    I didn't think there was a way
    To make it there to see it set
    But she just told me not to fret
    "We'll make it there, we'll find a way
    We won't let distance wreck our day"
    She pulled me close and kissed me hard
    I knew our day would not be marred

    And we watched as the Carolina sun
    Scared away the clouds on the horizon
    We chased it to the California coast
    And watched it burn up and become a ghost
    Yeah, we watched as the Carolina sun
    Scared away the clouds on the horizon
    We chased it to the California coast
    And watched it burn up and become a ghost

    And we were finally there at last
    The night was coming on so fast
    Clouds were moving in on the sun
    To swallow it, the day was done
    The California coast burned red
    The sun was gone, the sun was dead
    I pulled her close, she kissed me hard
    Our day was done, it passed unmarred

    And we watched as the Carolina sun
    Scared away the clouds on the horizon
    We chased it to the California coast
    And watched it burn up and become a ghost
    Yeah, we watched as the Carolina sun
    Scared away the clouds on the horizon
    We chased it to the California coast
    And watched it burn up and become a ghost
     
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    Well written and deeply beautiful.
     
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    Thanks. :)
     

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