"The Blackest Red" This black plague is gestating in my heart Awaiting its chance to burrow through my sternum And destroy everything that I've loved Because everyone's got the mind of a murderer And we've all got blood on our hands The escape is imminent I feel that my heart is breaking I feel that my lungs are bleeding Take my hand and lead me away from here Misfortune could strike you down I don't want to be around when that happens Behind the theater they all wait They know something's about to happen Gunshots ring out Oh, my God, am I losing it This stain on my shirt's too red I feel that my heart is breaking Oh, my God, am I losing it This stain on my shirt's too rd I feel that my lungs are bleeding Raise your head to the sky Crimson drops splash against your cheeks The blackest red Behind the theater they all wait And they've all got blood on their hands The escape is imminent Gunshots ring out Oh, my God, am I losing it This stain on my shirt's too red I feel that my heart is breaking Oh, my God, am I losing it This stain on my shirt's too red I feel that my lungs are bleeding The blackest red
Fade from red to blaaaaacccckkk! ;-P I like it, and it nice to see you posting some new lyrics. We need to start hearing the songs though lol.
This winter my band and I will be rehearsing and writing new material. Hopefully we'll have some songs up on purevolume.com by spring.
very strong use of emotion, a great choice of words. i could find no flaw... nothing i could detest. great job!