The 4th Passage

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    tkd_rap

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    The 4th Passage

    Follow me away from the dimension of sight
    Follow me beyond borders of light
    Come with me past the rusted gates of believe
    Come with me too the timeless world beneath

    Pass the deepest reaches of the stars to darkness
    Pass into the realm of the timeless
    Enter into a place between good & evil
    Enter the passage way only known through fable

    Here ye shall find the days of the past
    Here ye shall find the very sands of the Hour Glass
    For in here lay the three gates of fire
    For in here He journeyed to answer your innermost desire

    Through the sounds of the demons cackles
    Through the sounds of the devils squabbles
    He Made His way through a gate
    He Made His decision for mankind’s fate

    The first gate be the one made of human creed
    The second you may only pass through on the Devil’s steed
    The third look to be of heaven and built by the Divine

    But a fourth passage He did see
    But a fourth passage was not owned by me
    A perfect lamb it seems I have found
    A perfect servant to which mind is not bound

    Took the 4th passage upon himself he did
    Took the sin of the world upon himself he bled
     
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    Structured extremely well.

    I love it, but I don't believe in god.
     
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    Messy Marj

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    Dude, i'm speechless..... :eek:


    .......this is very very beautiful!
    I can't believe that there's not much response on this. :mellow:

    Can't wait till your next one :thumbsup:
     
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    tkd_rap

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    thans guys no one ever responds to much to topic is post in this forum, but on LPU forums, "The Lounge" i get more responces. Would like to see admins respond, i dont care if they hate God or whatever they have aginst him, just respond onm how you like it
     
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    Arhaz

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    that's stuff man...for how long have you been training...did it come out of a holy book that you are publishing or did you write it...damn! its neat work!!!awesome!!good...too cool...i mean ...can you hint me with a real eerie middle ages word that otherwise defines TOTALLY ROCKIN!!! :rawk:
     
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    tkd_rap

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    i dont know if i should laugh, or say thank you, so i guess i will do both. Thanx, lol
     
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    Though I don't really understand it (forgive me, I'm not good at literary stuff), it's nice! :lol:
     
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    This is good work!!! I like the way it rhymes. I don't believe in god, but this is great work. :)
     
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    tkd_rap

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    thanx yall
     

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