That Summer Love

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    That Summer Love

    Poetry, falls in colors (Like an autumn rain)
    In blocks that all differ from one another
    Like the curves upon your lips
    Their epic when we kiss
    And don't you say a thing (And silence rings in my heart)
    I see the hang racks are so clean
    But you don't need that fabled style
    Poetry, like the way you're staring at me now

    There doesn't have to be any words
    I'd still hear them, even if death fell on me
    And deaf ears from which vibrations do not ring
    You're an epic master piece

    But who had written you?
    A higher power?, surely not (Too perfect for a creator)
    The beauty that glows would had rot
    So with the green eyes that encase me now
    To you my love, I worship and I bow
    Greater than a deity you are to me

    There doesn't have to be any words
    I'd still hear them even if death fell on me
    And deaf ears would be like eyes
    I'd see you twice, in different ways
    Twice as real but seeming all a dream

    The moon sits still in a auburn marine sky
    I'd sit and watch it with you forever, 'til I die
    And even after my body's decomposed
    My love would grow as if any bud or petal
    Of an eternal rose
    (the color of an auburn sky rising)

    But who had written you?
    A higher power?, surely not
    The beauty that glows would had rot
    So with the green eyes that encase me now
    To you my love, I worship and I bow
    Greater than a deity you are to me

    (ohhhhhh) You have not a writer
    (ohhhhhh) Too perfect to be a higher power
    (ohhhhhh) A sunflower in your eyes
    (ohhhhhh) You were here, before even time
    (ohhhhhh) I loved you before we met
    (ohhhhhh) A summer piece of poetry
    (ohhhhhh) Greater than a deity you are to me
    (ohhhhh no) Until the next girl comes a long
    (ohhhhhh) And I sing this very song
    (ohhhhhh no) A surprise ending..


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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    You're very good, Jesse. I'm impressed.

    I really liked the auburn sky description. Great job. ^_^
     
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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Thank you Arlene, I'm glad that someone liked it. :lol:
    But everything in parenthathese were a last minute thing except the "ohhhhhs"
    And the last two lines were also last minute.

    Thanks again, I really appreciate it. ^_^
     
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    Luke

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    Jesse, that's pretty awesome dude. Keep it up. :)
     
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    Im speachless.....its Fabulous & Beautiful...picture perfect!!!
     

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