Thank You

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Linja, Apr 21, 2005.

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    It was his first day
    The third day to death
    New and young
    He had nothing left

    Walked in with nothing
    Walked out empty
    Leaving all hopes behind
    He tried to fit in

    He did not succeed
    He had little time left
    Golden reflections ruled his life
    What life he had left

    It was all right in the start
    But he’d moved on from the beginning
    Only memories left
    But not here anymore

    Struck with a silver blade
    His throat tightened
    Struck twice
    His shoulders wouldn’t move
    Only his heart left
    But that was dead long ago

    He had moments left
    What did he do?
    Looked his soul in the eye
    A tormented whisper
    ‘Thank you’

    R&R
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Nice, good work the both of you except the double topic on the same thing is very annoying, keep up the good work.
     

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