Thank You

I have always been alone in the dark
The pain I have felt, it had surrounded my heart
These cuts that cover my skin
Seem to always take me back when,
When I had nothing in this life of mine
And all I had was the blade of this knife,
But now it's all starting to change for the better
And I think I can stop writing my suicide letter

I just want to tell you, thank you

We haven't know each other for the longest time,
But for some reason it’s like I've known you all along
You are the one who will always know how I feel inside
And that's why I want you to be mine,
I can tell you like me too, hopefully I'm not wrong
You are the only one who I can open up to
And tell you what's goin' on in my head
And it has changed my life for the better

So, thank you

Hours, minutes, and seconds are passing
And you're almost the one by my side
You still have one more thing to do
Which I hope that you do and don't change your mind
Hopefully everything goes the way it should
Just like I hoped it would,
But still I want you to know I will never let you down
'Cause you have changed my life for the better

So once more I have to say, thank you ... for everything ...

 

That's really good, Tony!

 

Good job! I like it

 

Thanks you two

 

Those lines don't flow with the rest of the poem, but other than that great job B)

 

Those lines don't flow with the rest of the poem, but other than that great job B) [/b][/quote]
Yeah, I thought the same thing, but at the time I couldn't figure out anything to really put there instead. I'll probally change it sometime tomorrow when I get hom from school.

Oh, thank you for the comment

 

Really good!

 

Thank You